<p>Hey! </p>
<p>So I just finished writing my personal statement and was hoping I could get some people to help me revise it. It's on the first prompt (Describe the world you come from--for example, your family, community or school--and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.). Please be honest in critiquing my essay. I want to make my it the best it could possibly be. </p>
<p>Let me know if you want to read it and I'll PM it to you. Thank you!</p>
<p>i’ll be glad to read it. email me Danielkwon444@ aol . com</p>
<p>I could read it too:)
Email me at <a href="mailto:vanilla_z18@ymail.com">vanilla_z18@ymail.com</a></p>
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<p>ill be glad to read it my email is <a href="mailto:santana1305@live.com">santana1305@live.com</a> or you can pm me if you can</p>
<p>email to me andres.garcia_1 @ y a h o o .com ive been editing my friends and they like my feedback</p>
<p>Yeah sure pm me!!</p>
<p>Sure, copy and paste it in a PM and send it to me.</p>