Critique my UChicago essay?

<p>I would appreciate it if you would be willing to comment on my essay. I selected the topic, "Tell us the story of a street, path, road--real or imaginary or metaphorical." Thank you.</p>

<p>Sure, just PM me!</p>

<p>same! PM me please :)</p>

<p>sure pm me !</p>

<p>I'd love to help.</p>

<p>I'm actually doing the same essay topic about a (fictional) western road in the 1880s; I'd love to see what other people are writing about. If you don't mind that we're both writing on the same topic, please PM me and I'll critique it.</p>

<p>Sure. I love tearing apart essays and making people cry :)</p>

<p>I've already critiqued quite a few, but I'll critique yours if you want.</p>

<p>of course! you can send it in a personal message to me!</p>

<p>I'll help you out!
PM me, please!</p>

<p>Sure. PM it.</p>

<p>Yup, PM it to me! i'll critique it with my crappy skills haha</p>

<p>PM it to me if you want.</p>

<p>I'd love to read it! Yay class of '08... this is all still fresh to me.</p>

<p>PM!</p>

<p>I'd like to read it also, pm me.</p>

<p>Sure, PM me!</p>

<p>be more than glad to send me the doc!</p>

<p>Sure! I'd love to know how you went about answering that prompt!</p>