Critique my "Why BU" Essay?

College Essays
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<p>I'll PM you, it's 250 words. </p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>Me three.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you want another reader</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>