Critique my Why NU essay?

<p>Can anyone offer any suggestions, hints, critical analysis of my essay?</p>

<p>i will, pm me</p>

<p>Sure, why not?</p>

<p>ahhh!!!! I really need some constructive criticism!!!! Please! Haha. I'm desperate</p>

<p>pm me if you want another critique. thanks.</p>

<p>I'll help! PM it.</p>

<p>Hey, I was accepted at Northwestern ED, and I'd be happy to read over it. :-)</p>

<p>mportuguez: CONGRATULATIONS!!!</p>

<p>I am willing to take a look at it if you want.</p>

<p>Sure, PM it over to me! thanks!</p>

<p>Sure, pm it over and I'll be glad to read it. =D</p>

<p>pm it to me if you still help. =D</p>

<p>abkid 91: Thanks!</p>

<p>i will pm me</p>

<p>pm me if you need more help</p>

<p>I was also accepted ED (Weinburg and Bienen). I'll take a look.</p>

<p>i was accepted to ED for WCAS... I can take a look
heh i turned my why northwestern essay on nov. 1st :D</p>

<p>ill take a look
PM or email me</p>

<p>Guys, the deadline was January1. Chill.</p>