Critique needed for my upenn and northwestern essay!

College Essays
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<p>Hi! Anyone have time to read my upenn and/or northwestern supplement? Really need help! Message me or comment here if you can! Thanks!!</p>

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<p>Glad to help</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>Send it to me! I would gladly help!</p>

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<p>Sure, would love to help!</p>

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<p>If you still want some feedback, I’m available.</p>