critique on my final draft?

College Essays
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<p>It's for USC. Thanks in advance. Either tell me to PM or email you the draft.</p>

<p>thanks again.</p>

2

<p>ill do it with pleasure</p>

<p>oh yeah pm it to me ill read it</p>

3

<p>sure, send it over</p>

4

<p>any more?</p>

<p>preferably guys that are in college right now.</p>

5

<p>Sure. Send it now. =]</p>

6

<p>i’ll be happy to read it. you can pm me</p>

7

<p>Sure I’ll read it. You can pm me.</p>

8

<p>If you want another reader, PM me.</p>

9

<p>pm it over</p>

10

<p>I’ll do it, pm me.</p>

11

<p>I’ll look over itt, pm</p>