Critique on Why Uchicago essay?

<p>Can anyone critique my Why Uchicago essay? I feel like it's too vague and didn't really answer the question. And the topic and structure of my essay makes me kinda nervous because I compared it to Harvard :P </p>

<p>So any offers? I would really appreciate it X)</p>

<p>Also, I felt like I was too arrogant in my essay, like I assumed too much… i don’t know. Complicated feelings making me a nervous wreck haha</p>

<p>I’d love to read it! pm me!</p>

<p>I was accepted EA, PM me if you like</p>

<p>I was also accepted EA, I’ll read it</p>

<p>Thank you! I will PM you once I have it finished, hopefully tomorrow I need to revise my essay a bit :)</p>

<p>i was also accepted ea. send it to me unless the opinions of the other three posters are sufficient</p>