Critique Please

<p><em>The usual request for essay feedback</em></p>

<p>Please & Thanks. :)</p>

<p>You could PM it to me... I don't have many posts, so if you want an idea of who I am and whether I want to steal your essay (lol) I posted my own essay a few topics down from yours; 'Dying for a critique...' We could trade critiques ; )</p>