Critique/read my essay!

College Essays
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<p>I just finished a draft of my common app essay for the prompt:</p>

<p>Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity that they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.</p>

<p>I would greatly appreciate some feedback, since I intend to make more edits. This is my first time sharing an essay, so I'll PM you but I might mess it up somehow lol.</p>

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<p>I can read it for you!:)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>I can read it!</p>

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<p>Thanks everyone! I made a couple of changes, so if anyone would still like to critique it I can PM it to you (:</p>

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<p>i’ll read it!</p>

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<p>ill read it and give hints from my essay since im writing the same topic :)</p>