Critique UC Prompts 1 and 2

<p>Can anyone help me out and edit or give me some pointers on my two UC essays please? Thanks in advance.</p>

<p>sure! I'd be glad to give you some critiques on your essays. I just finished mine..wanna do an essay exchange? :)</p>

<p>I can take a look at it. PM me!</p>

<p>I can read it.</p>

<p>I'd be happy to read it... if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account... but i would prefer a pm</p>

<p><a href="mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu">sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>