Critque my 200 word essay?

[henryvisionp]

<p>anyone willing to critique/read my 200 word responses for the UC? I'd really appreciate it.</p>

<p>I'm almost done making revisions to my 600 word one, and I'd really appreciate some feedback.</p>

<p>Thanks in advance!</p>

[roflradar]

<p>I'll give it a look. :)</p>

[anurodh]

<p>pm me
i'll read it</p>

[movieburner125]

<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>PM me</p>

[confirm]

<p>ill take a look</p>

[zeropatience]

<p>let me take a look. PM me</p>

[Xitt]

<p>I'll read it, feel free to message it to me.</p>

[sweetdream]

<p>i can give you feedback</p>