Critque please for Drake University essay? COMMON APP PROMPT

College Essays
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<p>The prompt: Reflect on a time when you challenged a belief or idea. What prompted you to act? Would you make the same decision again? </p>

<p>I want to send this in tomorrow; if you have any last suggestions, I'd really appreciate the feedback. Let me know and I'll message you; thank you!</p>

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<p>Last suggestions? Do you have a draft or outline? </p>

<p>I think by “challenged a belief/idea” the script really means “stood up against convention at the risk of looking foolish.”</p>