Cube essay returns, comments please!

<p>I slowly ran my fingers along the sides of the object that I held in my hand. People today call it the Rubik's Cube. Many adventurous souls have at some point spent a minute or two with the Cube, twisting and turning the sides hoping to match the colors on each face. It was notorious for its difficulty, as solving one side often ruined what had already been solved I examined the enigmatic chunk of plastic resting silently between my nimble fingers. All six sides were scrambled, staring back at me through a messy explosion of color. </p>

<p>I remember walking through the toy store a few months prior, noticing the infamous Cube perched upon a lonely shelf. It was a silent beast, waiting to attack its next victim. Something compelled me to tame that beast. Cube in hand, I stepped out of the store with a smirk of determination plastered on my face. I remember my first attempts to solve the Cube. The many dents and divots in my wall serve as reminders.</p>

<p>Between homework assignments I would sit at my desk at home and develop solving methods. Wrinkles spread across my forehead as I tried to visualize the various outcomes of certain moves. I’d grind my teeth whenever I’d look at the Cube in its unsolved state, sickened by its utter lack of cooperation. Of course, it would only stare back at me, as if mocking my every move, taunting me to try to unlock its secrets. Every attempt to put an end to the colorful battle that raged on the Cube’s faces only resulted in a more vibrant war. My numb fingers couldn’t handle the aching. My desire to solve the Cube began to starve. I hungered for some form of progression. </p>

<p>Weeks later, the Cube began to make sense. Time had elucidated the solution for me, fusing the secrets of the Cube to my mind. Conquering a puzzle had never felt so wonderful before. When I was younger, putting together a 500-piece jigsaw puzzle or figuring out a magic card trick was satisfying enough, but the Cube, to me, was the master of all puzzles. Nothing else brought me the same kind of euphoria. </p>

<p>Leaning back against a lightpost in downtown Portland, I let my mind and muscles relax as my hands methodically began to manipulate the Rubik's Cube. The chaotic clash of colors became an iridescent whirlwind, accompanied by the continuous, rhythmic clicks that spilled out from each turn I made. Twenty seconds had passed before I matched up the colors on all six sides of the Cube. It was done. Someone slipped a dollar bill into my right hand. Looking up, my eyes met the face of a man with a cavernous, gaping void for a mouth. </p>

<p>“I’ve never met anyone who could solve a Rubik’s Cube before,” he told me.</p>

<p>I wanted to tell him that the Cube, although intimidating, was merely a puzzle that demanded time and persistence, and nothing more. Indeed, the Cube had taught me that through careful observation, solutions to even the most difficult puzzles can be uncovered. Effort brought answers closer to the mind's eye. Smiling at the man, I gave him back his money, telling him that it was best spent elsewhere – perhaps to solve a puzzle of his own.</p>

<p>okay, this might seem reeeeally random, but are you in Columbia Science Honors Program?</p>

<p>No, I'm not. Why? I am applying to Columbia though.</p>

<p>Oh crap I just realized I'm on Zant's name. She's over here for the winter break. This is legendofmax.</p>

<p>I really enjoyed reading the essay... not only is it very creative, but i liked your reactions to certain situations like the part about the dents in your wall, and the man who stuffed a dollar in your hand was very interesting.</p>

<p>But besides the fact that it makes a fun read.. what does it say about you? Okay, so we know you like playing with the Rubik's Cube and that you're good at solving puzzles. What about your personality though?</p>

<p>awesome essay..but dont know if its a college one..</p>

<p>I agree with icymoon about showing more about yourself. </p>

<p>Why? Because I was in class at Columbia SHP, and there was a person in the class working on the Rubik's Cube a few weeks ago. Columbia SHP is for students in the NY metro area, and you are from New York, NY... Yeah, I know. There must be so many people in NYC who are trying to solve the Rubik's cube.</p>

<p>I know about columbia SHP. (And I didnt' get in. :( yea I know sad) </p>

<p><--the real zante</p>

<p>legend! what's up man? long time no talk...anyways, 'tis much improved, sir. I'm beginning to see more of you in it. Reactions are the key, for sure. What's going on in your head when you're "taming the beast," is imperative to the success of this essay. There are still a couple of awkward/unnecessary sentences (e.g. "People today call it the Rubik's Cube.") and some awkward wording/phrasing (e.g. "fusing the secrets of the Cube to my mind"...I know what you're getting at, but it just looks forced to my eyes). My only other criticism would be to relax on the adjectives a bit; by my word processor count, you're at 552, so you could still tighten the belt just a bit before things start getting uncomfortable :D</p>

<p>All in all, though, I do think it's improved, and it's a cool essay to read.</p>

<p><em>waves to legend and zante</em></p>

<p>Hope Oregon's going well for the both of you!</p>

<p>Yeaaa
oregon is kinda...boring.
Make that, really boring.</p>

<p>Then again, just about anything would seem boring after New York.</p>

<p>This is true, this is true.</p>

<p>Haha! u actually solved the cube, that really is amazing. When i got one, i just peeled off all the colored stickers and re-stuck them on.</p>

<p>Brilliant! Ahhh! Why didn't I think of that? I gave up on the Cube back in the fifth grade, lol.</p>

<p>wow. we have identical essays.</p>

<p>well, not identical, but I wrote an essay about solving the Rubik's Cube, too. yours is a lot better, i think....hmmm...</p>

<p>I peeled the stickers off too :), but I never owned a cube, it was my 6th grade teacher's</p>

<p>firebird: hey there your stats are better than mine, leave me with my essay :)</p>

<p>Awww.. I love it. :-)</p>

<p>where else are u applying besides Princeton? </p>

<p>man, that would suck if the same admissions person read our two essays...decrease the originality of our essays like hellaz</p>

<p>Columbia, UPenn, Brown, Yale, Georgetown, Tufts, UVa, UC berk and UCLA, Lehigh</p>