curious what you guys think

<p>Hi, I'm a rising senior over at Jordan HS in Durham, NC. Im just curious of what you guys think about my resume.</p>

<p>class rank 11 out of 439
GPA 4.7 weighted 3,77 unweighted
ACT 28
SAT 1900 (taking again this June and hoping to break 2000)
AP's (10 total)</p>

<p>Sophomore year
Computer Science
Psychology</p>

<p>Junior year*
US History
European History
Environmental
English III</p>

<p>Senior year
BC Calculus
French
English IV</p>

<p>I had to take five classes a day second semester (I'm on block) which will leave me with 9 classes this year</p>

<p>EC's
Marching Band (Drumline Captain)
Indoor Drumline (Drumline Captain)
UN club (did this year)
FBLA (did freshman year)
environmental club (did this year)</p>

<p>work
last year I worked 200 hours at an animal hospital
this year I've worked 50 hours doing yard work for a neighbor
also this year I have done some limited day trading (I've made 14%)</p>

<p>plans for this summer
I plan to get my towns mayor's award which requires at least 100 hours of community service</p>

<p>the colleges I'm looking into are:
University of North Carolina Chapel Hill
University of Southern California
Stanford
Princeton
McGill
Duke</p>

<p>To me it seems like you have a shot, but i don't really see a passion in your EC's and I also don't see a hook. So my advice to you is right a great essay.</p>

<p>oh i also forgot I'm in both the French Honors Society and the National Honors society...</p>

<p>as for passion its music... with marching band I spend about 15 hours a week after school (during fall semester) and with indoor drumline its 6 hours a week after school (during winter/spring) by the time I graduate I will have done both of these for 3 years...</p>

<p>whats a hook?</p>