<p>i need your help. seriously</p>
<p>PM me it, for sure</p>
<p>also - where in NY are u from? u can PM that to me too if u'd like</p>
<p>not in brown but i wanna go, i'd like to read it u can pm it to me or email me at <a href="mailto:matthew654321@aol.com">matthew654321@aol.com</a></p>
<p>advice....dont give your essay to strangers on the internet</p>
<p>Aspen, I agree with your advice overall. </p>
<p>I also don't think an applicant to Brown should particularly share with another applicant a "why Brown" essay of all topics. There could be "duplicates" easily submitted, or variations thereof. </p>
<p>However, submitting a draft of a Why Brown essay to a current Brown student is harmless. Sure, you don't know who is who on the internet.....so be very wary. </p>
<p>However, you can choose to believe me or not, but MattyB, who made the offer to look over the essay, is truly a CURRENT Brown student. I have met him in person. I am a Brown parent and I am also a college counselor for College Confidential. MattyB is who he says he is. He is also a good writer :D. (he's good at a lot of things but I'll stick to writing for now!)</p>
<p>Soozie :-)</p>
<p>You're awesome haha</p>
<p>But in all seriousness, I'd be happy to read it.</p>
<p>The adcom told us that they liked people that were going to make good use of the open curriculum.</p>