<p>I need some new, fresh perspective on my personal statement.</p>
<p>Topic: Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.</p>
<p>I actually used my second essay for the University of California app for this one and edited it a bit. Right now I'm having that rather violent urge to go ctrl+A then Del. D:</p>
<p>Any help is greatly appreciated!!! Thank you!</p>
<p>(I'll send through PM btw)</p>
<p>Okay, i’m willing to help. Send it via PM and i’ll get back to you ASAP.</p>
<p>^ I believe the OP is seeking help from students who attend Yale.</p>
<p>^Yes, I am finding help from current Yalies.</p>
<p>@silver</p>
<p>I think all help is good help. I’m a very good writer and I don’t mind taking the time out of my busy schedule to help people on this site with essays. </p>
<p>@User</p>
<p>I just read your essay and I pointed out a few grammar mistakes and iffy wording.</p>
<p>if by send ASAP you mean before the weekend is over, then send it and I will critique, but I’ll be honest here, finals start in 2 weeks so if I don’t get it by the end of this week, I won’t read it</p>
<p>Former, but send and I’ll read if you’re looking for input on your writing and not a nitpick on grammar.</p>