Deadline in 2 days! Essay help please!

<p>I am in urgent need of a second opinion on my essay. Would any parents be willing to look over what I have so far and give me some feedback? :)</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>31 views....any takers?</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>send it to me via email right away at mariteht at yahoo.com</p>

<p>I'm not a parent, but I'm a pretty good editor. PM me if you're interested.</p>