Desperate for feedback! Just finished an essay...

<p>I just finished a 300 word essay on this prompt that goes something like:</p>

<p>Our School is very diverse. What do you look forward to in a diverse student body?</p>

<p>Anyone willing to read it?</p>

<p>I’ll read it !</p>

<p>Sure. Send it over.</p>

<p>ill read it</p>

<p>I will read! Will you read mine</p>