DESPERATE NEED FOR UC ESSAY REVISION!

<p>Hello! Could somebody please help me/ read my UC application essays? Your help would be so, so greatly appreciated! I've never been good at english, and I'm struggling so much- especially with prompt #1. </p>

<p>Please email me at: <a href="mailto:scarlettmel97@gmail.com">scarlettmel97@gmail.com</a></p>

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