<p>Hello all I realize my time is nearly up, but the person who was supposed to help me revise my essay has apparently disappeared from the face of the planet. So if any qualified individual...admissions staff/volunteer, skilled writer, or simply a person who understands throughly what it is to write a good UC personal statement is willing to help me it would be greatly appreciated. Seriously I am desperate, with a 3.05 GPA this statement is critical.</p>
<p>Lol so critical you waited until the last minute? If your school has a transfer center take it there and someone will be able to take a look at it for you. If you're really desperate take it to an english teacher at your school.</p>
<p>I did not wait until the last minute I've been awaiting several responses for weeks. Your sarcasm is not necessary and neither are your suggestions for utilizing resources I am clearly aware of. My school is closed for the week. If however you were trying to be helpful I apologize for my bluntness. I hope this response does not discourage others from assisting me. Any "real" hep would be greatly appreciated.</p>
<p>Hey, i'll take a look if you want, I submitted my application today, yay!</p>
<p>I would be willing to take a look at your essay and give you my comments. Feel free to PM me.</p>
<p>I actually was trying to be helpful but I understand I would be upset too if I only had a 3.05 have fun at merced</p>
<p>Again, really not appreciated and unnecessary.</p>
<p>agreed. totally unnecessary. </p>
<p>whoswithwhatnow: have fun wondering why people hate you</p>
<p>whoswithwhatnow: have fun learning rudimentary grammar.</p>
<p>Lion: feel free to PM me.</p>
<p>Lion: I'm done with my essays you can pm me if you want</p>
<p>Thanks all I got the help I needed, and I really appreciate so many people offering assistance. And they say there are no nice people left in the world...</p>