<p>my opening paragraph was said "makes no sense and does not catch the reader", so i delete it, trying to think out a new one. Could anyone help me to read my essay and give some advice to make a impressive opening?
Thanks in advance!</p>
<p>my opening paragraph was said "makes no sense and does not catch the reader", so i delete it, trying to think out a new one. Could anyone help me to read my essay and give some advice to make a impressive opening?
Thanks in advance!</p>