<p>I have just finished a draft of my college essay, but I am not sure how good it is.
Will someone PLEASE offer to read my essay and provide feedback and suggestions?
It would be greatly appreciated!</p>
<p>If you are willing, send me a message to my inbox and i will reply with the essay.
Thanks a lot!</p>
<p>You should not send your essays to strangers (no offense to anyone). It’s just not a safe practice. Have a parent or teacher look them over, or someone you know has your best interests in mind and someone you know you can trust.</p>
<p>I am best known for chancing but I am actually less than adequate to read an essay; the impression that essay gave me was that UPenn Wharton or Cornell Dyson was on your radar; Brown BEO prefers students who have a penchant for entrepreneurship.</p>