DESPERATELY TRYING TO GET INTO A TOP SCHOOL.

<p>I have just finished a draft of my college essay, but I am not sure how good it is.
Will someone PLEASE offer to read my essay and provide feedback and suggestions?
It would be greatly appreciated!</p>

<p>If you are willing, send me a message to my inbox and i will reply with the essay.
Thanks a lot!</p>

<p>Don’t forget to specify the prompt (especially if the top school in question has some… exotic prompts, like UChicago)</p>

<p>@Catria‌ You seem knowledgeable, so if I messaged you my essay, would you be willing to read it? If not, that’s okay. </p>

<p>I don’t know how well I would do, but I would be happy to help…</p>

<p>You should not send your essays to strangers (no offense to anyone). It’s just not a safe practice. Have a parent or teacher look them over, or someone you know has your best interests in mind and someone you know you can trust.</p>

<p>I am best known for chancing but I am actually less than adequate to read an essay; the impression that essay gave me was that UPenn Wharton or Cornell Dyson was on your radar; Brown BEO prefers students who have a penchant for entrepreneurship.</p>