<p>is this one of the Essay Dont’s that i should abide by or is it totally cool. Cuz i feel that in this anectdote im recounting, quoting something that was said to me would increase th eeffectiveness a lot</p>
<p>I think that it can work in your advantage. When recalling an account, the more vivid and detailed, the better. Just make sure that ALL of the dialouge supports your view and angle. Dialouge isn't a "Don't." But, I may be wrong.</p>
<p>--later</p>
<p>in my case i think it adds significantly to the anectdote so ima run with it lol</p>