<p>Wow, you guys make this site is awesome, theres so much information I wish I had known earlier. </p>
<p>Anyway...
I don't really have anyone to edit my essay, because it mentions a family member's death and thus nobody I know can objectively edit it. When I show it to my family, they will only say good things, even though I can see obvious errors. And its somewhat awkward for my friends to read, because they feel obligated to only give praise. When they do give constructive criticism it's limited to the opening and concluding paragraphs, as they are unsure what to say about the middle. I was going to ask teachers, but I think the subject will put them in an awkward spot, especially when they talk to me face to face about it. </p>
<p>So is there anyone older than a highschool student who would give it a quick read? And also don't be afraid to be harsh... I'm hoping the security and anonymity of the internet will allow for this. And if for some reason your a in highschool and would actually want to edit this, i guess thats okay, but i feel that parents or college students might relate better
sorry for being so picky about something people do out of goodwill </p>
<p>Thanks</p>