diversity essay...READ?!

College Essays
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<p>so i've written a 1st draft, does anyone want to read or offer suggestions?</p>

<p>its prompt 5 for the common app:
A range of academic interests, personal perspectives, and life experiences adds much to the educational mix. Given your personal background, describe an experience that illustrates what you would bring to the diversity in a college community, or an encounter that demonstrated the importance of diversity to you.
I went for "an encouter that demonstrated the importance of diversity"</p>

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<p>Sure I'll read it if you PM it to me</p>

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<p>sure. send it over.</p>

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<p>I'll read it, if you'd like.</p>

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<p>i'll read it plz!!!</p>

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<p>I'd like to read it too. Please PM me.</p>

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<p>I'd definitely like to read it. Just PM!</p>

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<p>I'll read it if you PM it to me!</p>

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<p>I'd like to read it too, PM me~</p>

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<p>i would love to read it--thanks!</p>

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<p>I'll takee a look</p>

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<p>pm me please. I will do my best on helping you. :)</p>

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<p>PM me ~ i will do my best</p>

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<p>PM me and I'll tell you what I think. yay.</p>