Does anyone want to proofread/comment on my essay?

College Essays
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<p>If you are willing to comment and proofread one of my college app essays, please let me know. I wrote about my parents' divorce for the "Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you" topic.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll critique it. PM me.</p>

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<p>Sure! PM me and I’ll read it and give you any feedback I may have! :D</p>

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<p>ill take a look also!</p>