Does anyone want to read and hopefully edit my CommonApp essay?

<p>It's answering prompt 1 (the significant experience).</p>

<p>I'll probably just PM it to you, but if you'd prefer e-mail, just PM me your email adress.</p>

<p>Additionally, I'll be applying to Stanford (EA) Ivy's, WashU, Duke, Johns Hopkins, etc.</p>

<p>Any advice or comments will be greatly appreciated.</p>

<p>Thanks so much,
brownman23</p>

<p>I will edit if you send it. I am not an applicant.</p>

<p>bump 10char</p>

<p>I will read it if you send it to me.</p>

<p>buuump. Stanford’s EA is due pretty soon, and I need the critiques. Please help.</p>

<p>Thanks so much for those who helped already!</p>

<p>Still need help? PM me</p>

<p>i can read it and give you some feedback
pm me</p>

<p>I’ll give you some feedback if you need it, PM me :O</p>