<p>This is just a regular essay for the common app. Please send me a response below and I will send my essay to you.
I appreciate any feedback or commentary!</p>
<p>yes ill read it</p>
<p>I can read it!</p>
<p>Thank you for offering to read it! I will message them to you.</p>
<p>I will edit for content and grammar.</p>
<p>I would love to read it. 
Just PM it to me.</p>
<p>I’ll read it.</p>
<p>I’ll read it</p>
<p>If you haven’t already, please PM me and tell me what you think because I plan to submit my application before next week.</p>
<p>And thanks again for reading, I appreciate your input. :)</p>
<p>Would anyone like to read another essay I wrote and give me some critiques? This one is very short</p>
<p>I can read both.</p>
<p>i’ll read it</p>
<p>I will gladly help. :)</p>
<p>pm me it and I’ll give my feedback. thanks.</p>
<p>I’ll happily read and comment.</p>
<p>i’ll do it!</p>
<p>a big thank you to everyone who already read my first essay.
And I just PMed my second essay (UC prompt 2) to: chrisdesuyo, iwanttobegandalf, Sunny315x, UriA702, bigboba</p>
<p>I am submitting Monday, so any last minute feedback before monday evening would be appreciated.</p>
<p>Thanks and happy holidays!</p>
<p>I would not mind reading any of your essays an I will send feedback.</p>
<p>I would be more than happy to read it and try to offer you some feedback. Please PM me if you wish for me to read it!</p>
<p>ok just to let you know, i’m sure all of the people here are genuinely trying to be helpful (and if they’re like me they also really just want to know what other people’s essays look like) but in general, it is probably not a good idea to share your essay over the internet. you risk having people who think that they can steal your essay and that the admissions officers won’t notice because they read so many. trust me–they notice.</p>