does my essay have racist undertones?

Student Lounge African-American Students
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<p>would anyone like to read it and tell me what they think?</p>

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<p>haha yes i will.</p>

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<p>I’d give it a read</p>

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<p>lol sure</p>

<p><em>message too short</em></p>

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<p>Obviously would need to read it…but if you hafta ask, be cautious</p>

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<p>sure, i’m always up for that</p>

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<p>Now you have spiked my interest. I’ll give it a read. I’ve submitted my app to Wharton ED.</p>

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<p>yes, I will read it</p>

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<p>… After reading that essay you have defiantly spiked my curiosity. So, just out of curiosity what was your SAT score ? I am most interested in what you got on the verbal section in particular. Where are you applying ?</p>

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<p>i will read it. message me</p>

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<p>So is it adequate for the caliber if the schools I’m applying to? I’m considering Columbia, NYU (mom attended), UPenn (mom works there), tcnj, etc… Sat 2160 reading 800 math 640 writing 720.</p>

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<p>Response to kafkare: caliber of not if sorry</p>

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<p>hey, I want to read it too.</p>

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<p>if you want another opinion i will be glad to give one</p>

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<p>I’d love to read it. PM me</p>

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<p>same deal. PM me, i’ll tell ya what i think</p>

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<p>i would love to take a look at it also…message me too</p>

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<p>nevermind you probably shouldnt seeing as i dont fit the CC consolidated list of essay reader’s criteria…oh well :)</p>

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<p>If you’re still looking for someone to read it, I’d be glad to do so!</p>

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<p>message me too</p>