Does my essay scream out "perfect for MIT"?

<p>Hey guys, PM me and I'll send you a rough draft of my essay that I just typed up. I think it's turning out pretty well so far, but I want to know if it "screams out" that I'm a match for MIT or not. I didn't want to post it here because then the whole internet could see it, hope you understand ;)</p>

<p>BUMP bigity bigity BUMP - BUMP BUMP bigity bump BUMP bump BUMP BU-BUMP Bump.</p>

<p>Oh wait, I said to PM me, I meant I will PM it to you. Respond in this thread if you want to see my essay. It's really super awesome, I promise.</p>

<p>I'm always up for essays. Just PM me.</p>

<p>I guess I'll read it since no one else has replied yet (in the thread anyway).</p>

<p>EDIT: Someone got in before me, so someone has replied, but I'll still read it.</p>

<p>Send in your essay.</p>

<p>If you're interested, I will send in mine as well.. but I don't think it would be "super-awesome" though.. lol</p>

<p>Sure, I'll read it.</p>

<p>can i have a look as well?</p>

<p>Send it to me, I'll take a look at it too.</p>

<p>PM me anytime</p>

<p>I'll have a look if you want.</p>

<p>PM it here</p>

<p>I'll take a look if you want.</p>

<p>PM me, but will yu also like to take a look at mine? :)</p>

<p>I would be happy if you PM it to me.</p>

<p>Yes i will be more than happy to Proof read it</p>

<p>PM me too!</p>

<p>Uh, yeah, me too.</p>

<p>I mean, PM me too.</p>

<p>ah sorry for some reason i had my private message thing turned off. PM me again! :)</p>

<p>Since I just finished mine... I wouldn't mind taking a look</p>

<p>I could proofread it too if you'd like, I'm kind of a grammar freak</p>