<p>Hello everyone,</p>
<p>I've written the first draft of one of my ideas for the CA essay, however I don't know if it really goes anywhere, or says anything about me. I'd love to have the opinion of others, not necessarily for grammatical tips or syntax, but just to see if I'm on the right path. Anyone that's a high school graduate is welcome to read, and I'd greatly appreciate your feedback! Just PM me :) </p>
<p>Thanks in advance!
-figureskater405</p>
<p>I will give it a look if you want to pm me…</p>
<p>mominaz–I’ve PMed you 
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<p>Anybody else willing to look it over?</p>
<p>i’ll take a look at it. if you want…</p>
<p>PM it over! I’ll give you some feedback afterward!</p>
<p>I’d glad to help!:)</p>
<p>Thanks for all the responses, guys! I’ve PMed my essay over to you all :)</p>
<p>I’d be happy to look too!</p>
<p>Thanks so much 314159265!</p>
<p>Hi everyone,</p>
<p>Many thanks to you all for looking over my essay and providing such insightful feedback! If anyone’s interested, I have an edited version which I would love to get some comments on. You all are awesome :)</p>