Does this even count as an application essay?

College Essays
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<p>My essay is something I wrote a few months ago without even considering its role as a college application essay. But now that I've read it again, it seems like it describes me quite nicely. However, I'm not sure whether it would function well as an application essay at all. Can anyone help me? I'll PM the essay over to you soon.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>it sounds like a college essay if it shows your personality. Perhaps you don't want it to "Describe" as much as "show"</p>

<p>you can email me if you want: <a href="mailto:artemies@gmail.com">artemies@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>I'll be happy to read it.</p>

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<p>sure, send it over.</p>

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<p>I'm in the class of '09, but I'll be glad to give some you some feedback.
Just PM me</p>

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<p>same here, PM me :)</p>

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<p>Sure, PM me!</p>