Does this topic seem effective?

College Essays
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<p>For one of my essays on my transfer application to UNC Chapel Hill I have decided to use the common app option 6 where you write about a topic of your choice. </p>

<p>I want to write about this topic: </p>

<p>Asses this statement and describe how you fit the criteria:
…“we look for real people with a variety of qualities--from intellect, curiosity, creativity, leadership, kindness, and courage, to diversity of background and experience.” – UNC Admissions Webpage </p>

<p>I would break down each part of the statement with evidence from my life as to how I fit into their campus. </p>

<p>What do you guys think? Will it be effective?</p>

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<p>any ideas?</p>

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<p>Your method of attack seems to have a lot of potential, as long as you’re good at describing the evidence with imagery and good details.</p>

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<p>thanks for the reply.
I want to get started on this tonight, any more opinions? Thanks!</p>