Double digit essay? Please critique.

<p>11-12 on the real SAT. Sure, it’s not a masterpiece, but it’s the type of essay that the graders of the SAT look for: intro, two paragraphs of examples, conclusion. As far as SAT essays go, this one’s near perfect. Also, I used the Galileo example as well (almost exactly the same) on the SSAT two years ago :D</p>