<p>Dammmn thanks folks, makin’ me feel really good. :D</p>
<p>I thought the first body paragraph was kinda awkward with two examples in one, but guess it was decent. </p>
<p>@StudiousMaximus, thanks a lot bud! Yeah, I kinda lulled for like 2 mins of the essay so that hurt me on the developing ideas part. </p>
<p>@Taco, loool, I’m using a sheet of binder paper to write, so I really don’t know whether this is too long or what.</p>
<p>@Chrome16, ahaha yup this prompt was one of the May 2007 ones. Thanks for the comments!</p>