Doubts about my essay...

<p>I am almost done writing my first draft of Common App essay, but I just realized that it might be too generic and ramblish...</p>

<p>Would anyone be interested in reading it and giving some general advice?
It's missing a conclusion atm. Don't know if I am gonna stick with this topic though, so..</p>

<p>I would be glad to read it. send a PM, and say what kind of feedback would be most beneficial (since it's not exactly finished yet). </p>

<p>btw I'm going to college this fall, so I am safe.</p>

<p>Ill read it . PM me it.</p>

<p>Okay thanks guys. Anyone else?</p>

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<p>...Are you calling me here? </p>

<p>Whether that's a yes or a no, I'll help you out.</p>