draft comparison

i wrote two drafts of my essays BUT I CANT Decide which one i like more.

and if you do decide on a draft can you tell me what about it was better and what about it was worse?

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<p>I liked the first one better. The intro was more well-written and the paper itself was better than the other.</p>

<p>so you're saying pretty much there was nothing worth keeping from the second one? </p>

<p>if anyone can tell me that would be awesome. this is a really imp. decision i have t make on choosing a draft</p>

<p>just bumping</p>

<p>please i need opinions, this is a very important essay and i'm not sure which one to choose</p>

<p>bump////// i honestly need a few op</p>

<p>:( i'm going ot keep trying</p>