Draft of First Essay

<p>Just finished a draft of my first college essay under the topic "Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you." </p>

<p>If anyone wants to provide some feedback, please ask or PM me, and I will send it to you as soon as possible.</p>

<p>If anyone else needs help with their essay, send me a PM, and I will give feedback.</p>

<p>Thanks all!
I really appreciate it.</p>

<p>I’ll read it!</p>

<p>PM me, and I will do my best. I can help loads with grammar!</p>

<p>sure! PM me</p>

<p>I’ll give a read!</p>

<p>I’ll help. pm me</p>

<p>PM me , I’ll try to help .</p>

<p>I’ll read it</p>

<p>I’d love to! PM it to me</p>

<p>I chose the same prompt! PM it to me :)</p>

<p>i’ll read it!</p>

<p>I’d love to read it!</p>

<p>pm me! I’ll read it :)</p>

<p>I want to read it.</p>

<p>I’ll read it and comment. Please read/comment on mine in a week or so? :)</p>