Drafted my $10 JHU Essay - Need advice/feedback

Applying to College
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<p>As title says, I'm in desperate need of feedback and advice. If you are interested, could you please leave your name? And I'll email/PM/IM it to you, depending on what you're more comfortable with.</p>

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<p>well i'll read ur essay. PM me. my name? i'm not going to plagiarize ur essay. heck i'm not even applying to JHU. i just feel uncomfortable telling others of my name on an anonymous forum.</p>

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<p>No, I didn't mean it that way. I meant just to post that you are interested (i.e. your nickname ... like... leave your... name...)</p>

<p>Haha, sorry for the confusion.</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

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<p>PM MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEe</p>

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<p>pm me too!</p>

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<p>pm me2....</p>

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<p>pm me tooo</p>

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<p>you can pm me</p>

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<p>You can PM me too. It seems like you'll get lots of opinions! :D</p>

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<p>PM meee! :)</p>

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<p>me tooooooooooo</p>

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<p>...wow.</p>

<p>don't PM me, I won't read it, but wow.</p>

<p>college confidential is either amazingly altruistic or amazingly in need of college essay topics.</p>

<p>sheesh.</p>

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<p>hahhaha
more than 9 'pm-me' posts.... a lot of applicants to JHU :P</p>

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<p>pm me or send an email at <a href="mailto:kacy731@aol.com">kacy731@aol.com</a></p>

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<p>Haha, I applied last year. He doesn't have to worry about me stealing it. :D</p>