<p>“Would someone please explain to me why an extended essay is considered such a difficult part of the IB diploma requirements? I know that at our school the kids that do not get the diploma do not get it because they chose not to do an extended essay. I understand that it is your own research, but at 4000 word is hardly a BIG paper.”</p>
<p>I think 4k words is a big paper for high school students, although it is not a big paper for college students and that is one of the goals of IB – to prepare high school students for college level workloads. But the size is not the main issue for most students. In fact, one of the biggest problems for some students is too many words that aren’t quality words, just filler.</p>
<p>The extended essay is graded in large part on the quality of the research, reasoning and analysis. A 4k word paper that is mostly descriptive or narrative as they call it (i.e., merely summarizes rather than analyzes) will get low marks. Of course, the EE does have to have some descriptive writing to form the basis for the analysis, but the paper is scored primarily on the quality of the research, reasoning and analysis. </p>
<p>The reality is that many high school students have learned how to summarize but have not learned critical reasoning skills and even if they have, have not learned how to organize and present an analysis in a written format. Many of them can articulate points, but when you ask them to write these points up formally, they have difficulty. And that is exactly what students are asked to do in many college level courses.</p>
<p>This link below shows you the general assessment criteria for the EE. Some are pretty easily satisfied – such as including your research question in the introduction – others are more difficult to satisfy – such as presenting a reasoned argument and applying analytic and evaluative skills appropriate to the subject matter.</p>
<p>[Extended</a> essay guide](<a href=“http://production-app2.ibo.org/publication/19/part/3/chapter/7]Extended”>http://production-app2.ibo.org/publication/19/part/3/chapter/7)</p>
<p>“S’s paper was 17 pages plus footnotes. His problem was that he wrote an analytical paper based on what he knows about the topic, not a research paper – and had to go back and find support for all of his assertions.”</p>
<p>I think your S’s example is precisely why the EE is a great experience. Most high school students have never been asked to cite to sources to back up what they have to say and in college, you are often asked to do that. So this is a new experience for many of them and one that helps to prepare them for college level writing.</p>
<p>“IB also wants specific approaches to the material and certain concepts to be raised. S said that if it were a plain research paper, he would have been good, but backmapping in the IB required stuff was a pain. Of course, had he read the guidelines he received last April, he might have had more of a clue.”</p>
<p>I had this exact issue with my DD. She wanted to “just get started writing.” I had her sit down and go over the guidelines and explain them back to me as a way to get her familiar with the assignment. As I told her, you can write the best paper in the world but if the paper is not written in the way the assignment asked you to write it, then you get a low mark. </p>
<p>I think this is a valuable lesson for kids to learn not just for college, but in life, too. In my experience, the work place is filled with people who have difficulty merely following instructions. They get started on a project without fully understanding what they are being asked to do and then time and effort (which equals money in the workplace) is wasted because what they are doing isn’t what needs to be done to get the job done.</p>