Decision: Accepted
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Objective:
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[] SAT I: 2160 (730 CR, 700 M, 730 W)
[] ACT: 33C (34E, 33M, 33CR, 30S, 31CE)
[] SAT II: Spanish 730, US History 730, Math 1 690, Literature 710
[] Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 4.0
[] Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): 1/131
[] AP (place score in parenthesis): Spanish Lang (5), English Lang (5), US History (5), European History (5), Marcoeconomics (5), Psychology (5).
[] IB (place score in parenthesis): N/A
[] Senior Year Course Load: AP English Language, AP Microeconomics, AP Chemistry, AP Calculus AB, Advanced Spanish, Senior Service Project, Ethics, and Puerto Rican History.
[] Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): National Merit Finalist, National Hispanic Recognition Scholar, AP Scholar with Distinction[/ul]
Subjective:
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[] Extracurriculars: Model United Nations (Designated Recruiter, have won first twice, competed and placed internationally), English Club (Founder and President), Poetry Out Loud (Won school competition, competed at state-level), National Honor Society (Vice-president), Brainstorming Writing Competition (President, have won various prizes), Technology Club (President), Sacramental Confirmation Assistant, Science Competition Club (Secretary, have competed at state-level).
[] Job/Work Experience:Interned at Louisiana State Senate for two weeks.
[] Volunteer/Community service: Vietnam Estudia Tutor (Tutoring, +100 Hours), Headstart Teacher’s Assistant (+40 Hours), National Honor Society (+180 Hours). Total= +320 Hours.
[] Essays: For my Common App, I wrote about my culturally mixed upbringing. Long story, short: I was born to a Puerto Rican mother and an American father in New Orleans, Louisiana. I moved to Puerto Rico after Hurricane Katrina. I wrote particularly about my troubles adapting to a new culture and finding my own identity. I conclude by assimilating both American and Puerto Rican culture. I’d give this essay a 9/10. I think my story is pretty unique and crafted it like a story. I displayed my creative writing style by using colorful comparisons and flowery language (cause that how I write). I also revised it about 1,000 times, so it was well made. For “Why Duke”, I kinda just stuck to the script and mentioned programs I was interested in. Nothing special here, 7/10. For the diversity essay, I reemphasized my Latin heritage in a impassioned manner. Well-written, 8/10.
[] Teacher Recommendations:11th Grade APUSH teacher and 10th Grade English teacher. Did not see either letter (School Policy), but both are excellent writers and know me personally. I’d guess 8/10.
[] Counselor Rec: Did not see this letter either, but I’d assume it wasn’t too great. One counselor for 130 students, so I’m guessing bad results. I didn’t suck up to her either, so i’m betting on 6-7/10.
[] Additional Rec: Lobbyist for Health company (I interned for her). Excellent letter. Well-written and portrays me as multidimensional and hard-working. 9/10.
[] Interview:Did not offer[/ul]
Other
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[] State (if domestic applicant): Puerto Rico (Territory ftw)
[] Country (if international applicant): USA
[] School Type: Competitive Private Catholic School
[] Ethnicity: Puerto Rican
[] Gender: Male
[] Income Bracket: +200,000
[] Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): Lives in Puerto Rico?[/ul]
Reflection
- [] Strengths:GPA, Plenty of Extracurriculars,Class Schedule, Standarized Testing, Essays, Ethnicity.
[] Weaknesses: No real hook, Nothing truly exceptional in my Extracurriculars.
[] Why you think you were accepted/waitlisted/rejected: Strengths + living in Puerto Rico (location, location, location)
[] Where else were you accepted/waitlisted/rejected:
Accepted: LSU, Vanderbilt, UMich, Notre Dame, Hopkins, Emory, Tulane, Boston College, and University of Puerto Rico.
Rejected: Stanford
Waiting on: Harvard, Princeton, UPenn, UNC Chapel, Tufts, Georgetown.
**General Comments:Take a breath and realize how much hard work you have put into the last four years of your life. If you got in, celebrate it. If you didn’t, forget it and move on. Happiness is all about how quickly you notice the next silver lining. **