EAP UC Davis needs some help

<p>HI guys,</p>

<p>I am a student from germany, who will attend UC davis in fall. I've got accepted for 2 quarters but I want to stay there for 3 quarters :) I wrote a short letter to the admission and I am looking for an english native speaker who could take a look on the letter and tell me if there are any problems with grammar. it would be great!!!</p>

<p>thanks</p>

<p>thank you very much</p>