EC essay w/out sounding cheesy :D

<p>Could you please critique my shot answer ec essay? I'm afraid is sounds rather cheesy...
any help is much appreciated. thanks!</p>

<p>PM it to me.</p>

<p>sure i'll read</p>

<p>ill read it too. thanks.</p>

<p>Sure. PM it.</p>

<p>I'd be more than happy to read it.
PM me or send it to <a href="mailto:dorkerrhea@gmail.com">dorkerrhea@gmail.com</a>.</p>

<p>I faced the same trouble with my essays. lol.
Hopefully I can help!</p>

<p>PM me, I'll read it.</p>

<p>PM me it as well. I'd love a read.</p>

<p>I'd love to critique it. PM me! :-)</p>

<p>I'll read it. =] pm me.</p>

<p>wow!! look at all the nice people trying to help out. Gotta love CC</p>