ED Writing Supplement Essay(CoE)

I just joined!!!
Would there be anyone kind enough to read and help me finalize my essay ? (grammar, wording…)
PLZ I AM DESPERATE…S2

better go sleep…o<-<(it’s 3 A.M. and Monday here! mmhm international yup

@redsoda i guess i don’t mind reading it and giving u feedback, but at the same time, i really don’t think that u should be sending it to any random person online in the first place. u r better off keeping it to yourself and asking someone u know personally to read it. never put ure essay online for people to copy before u have even submitted it!

@hellokitty679 oh I get it…yea I totally agree…thanks for the advice!!! wish me luck :>