<p>I wrote the common app extracurricular essay, but it is currently 187 or so words. Can you guys take a quick look at it and give some feedback on how to shorten it or just feedback in general??</p>
<p>A quick response is appreciated.</p>
<p>i'd be happy to help. just send over a pm.</p>
<p>pm or email: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a><a href="not%20an%2009-er">/email</a></p>
<p>Anyone Else???</p>
<p>Sure, I'll take a look. PM me</p>
<p>PM me and I'll give you a detailed critique, but you'll have to do the same for me when I am done rewriting mine. (I just sent out my EA batch so it'll be a while until I can ready my RD ones. Because of my critique, I like to communicate via e-mail because I can attach your essay comments as a Word document so that I can directly mark on your essay what I liked and what I didn't like. </p>
<p>Note: When you PM me, if you plan on communicating via e-mail, include your e-mail address with your essay, so when I'm done I can send your critique directly to your inbox. Also, tell me what kind of schools you're applying to --- it doesn't need to be specific, just say "Ivy League," "LAC," etc. so I know what you're targeting)</p>
<p>...okay, i'll peer edit it.</p>