edit my personal statements?

<p>would anyone like to give me feedback on my UC prompts? please comment and i'll PM them to you! criticism is welcomed. :)</p>

<p>PROMPT #1: Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>

<p>PROMPT #2: Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?</p>