Edit My "Who am I?" Essay?

<p>This was the essay I chose for the topic of your choice on the common app... Anyone want to critique it?</p>

<p>I’m '09 but have finished my common app essay already. I’m a great editor, so if you’re comfortable, I’d be happy to read it for you.</p>

<p>Sure, I’ll read it when I get a chance</p>

<p>and if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account… but I’d prefer a pm</p>

<p><a href=“mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu”>sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>