EDIT transfer essay

<p>Hi. I just finished my 250 word common app trasnfer essay for Mt.Holyoke, amherst and smith college. Is anyone be willing to proofread it ? Any critique or comments on content, style, structure and organization of the essay will be hugely appreciated.</p>

<p>ill take a look at it if you like and give you some honest feedback, and just to let you know the essay is not limited to 250 words thats just the minimum. PM me it.</p>

<p>I’ll be happy to look over the essay for you.</p>