<p>Because I really don't want to start writing my own.</p>
<p>What I will do:
Explain flow problems, length, things that don't make sense, word choice, voice, and individuality.</p>
<p>What I wouldn't do:
Correct all your spelling/grammar mistakes</p>
<p>Things you should include in the message:
The essay
The school it's for
The prompt</p>
<p>Anyways, hope to help. PM them to me, obviously. Posting in the thread is your choice.</p>