EFC 0 and private scholarship applications does this seem sketchy

I think that the questions that you should be asking are:

Is the school scholarship of $2100 guaranteed for all 4 years.

What are the requirements to keep this particular scholarship?

It seems on face that the
SEOG $300
other scholarships $1832
school grant $800

may be one time events.

How will you make this up in subsequent years ($2932)?

Again, How much are your direct costs?

How much will you need to meet the direct cost (tuition, fees, room and board) ?

Will your daughter have to borrow to make this happen? if yes, how much?

You said that the self help portion of her financial aid $1200 (FWS) was reduced by her outside scholarship.

What I would ask is if her subsidized loan could be reduced by $1200. Since she will need pocket money anyway, she might as well keep the work study and reduce the her costs. this would bring her sub loan to $1800 and her unsub to $2000.

I would not be spending my time wanting them to reduce the $448 Plus loan that you as the parent may have to take out(you are going to save more than $448 once she goes off to school in reduced food monies, electrical costs, pocket money ~$1.27 per day. I would ask if the $448 be contributed back to her cost reducing her sub loan from $1800 to $1352.

Again, she needs a summer job so that she can have some start up monies, to purchase her books and school supplies when she gets to campus.